To Do List:

•  make thesis clearer 
• use a structure to my writing
• cite where my information came from 
• be a bit more specific and broaden information used in essay 

For this essay I would say that the hardest part was to actually get my thoughts out and put them in the writing. there was so much information, trying to organize them and make coherent points was kind of hard also keeping  in mind the two page requirement. it was hard to explain the information and keep it coherently flowing from one sentence to the next. My next attempt at this essay will include me just being more specific and better prepared to get my thoughts out in a more organized manner.